No.2114
Now I'm making a world map, trying to do it paradox style/make it look like border gore hellscape.
I'll post the document with the map when I finish drawing Europe.
No.2115
>>2114Hmmm, maps. Do you have any principles as to how to approach it or are you just doing it on the fly?
No.2116
>>2115I have three layers open, one that's the base map, one that's the political map of the modern world, and one that has the terrain/mountains/rivers that sort of shit.
Then I have three more layers, one is where I trace over the modern day borders, another where I put the numbers (I'm using a document to track the nations as they expand), and one layer that's blank at the moment but when I finish drawing Europe or get to like, turn whenever I get bored I'll post the results and the PDF file of it.
No.2117
>>2114Border gore is real life; Azerbaijan/Armenia/Nagorno-Karabkh could totally be from any typical CK/EU run.
No.2118
>>2117I agree but I like making my own border gore because it looks cool.
Borders should be haphazardly drawn on cool """alt""" history maps.
No.2121
>>2119Well here's an example of my map game/risk game that I never played
>>>/aut/2072 No.2122
Spitballing an idea here, might be a project soon.
Idea is this:
GATE but with a Warsaw pack nation (maybe North Korea or China?).
And it turns into a situation where the fantasy races learn how to repair and use the guns so it turns into a huge shitshow with factions with guns, vs magic and guns, vs like, magic user vs the North Korean army or whatever Warsaw pack country I pick.
I'm thinking it's like, imagine Soulstorm-type situation, and the story follows one factions rise to greatness and their encounters with the different factions. It wouldn't be the North Koreans or China because they're the invaders like demon lord shit.
No.2124
So in actuality its more like 6 chapters have been done, five chapters edited/slightly rewritten.
I'm on the seventh chapter but I lost motivation for it. I want to add like a new character to the story.
I haven't posted it to anywhere, but I just feel like I wanted to share it.
No.2126
Hey before anyone gets autistic and yells at me
Yes I know I'm using the term Warsaw Pact wrong.
It should be something else. I don't know the exact term.
No.2128
BRICS? In a modern sense
No.2129
>>2127That would be the entire Communist Sphere, which is close because I might just have it be a collation of the Soviets, China, and North Korea (Who are the real bad guys.)
Okay so in this War Game that I have called Red Dragon, they're called, get this:
Red Dragon No.2130
>>2129Did the sino-soviet split not happen in this world
No.2131
>>2130We haven't gotten close to that yet, but I think for the story I think the sino-soviet split doesn't happen
yet but its on the verge of happening.
But this is more of a focus on like, a fantasy race (I'm thinking Orcs because goddammit I like Orcs because I can relate to them.) manages to get arms first and then it turns into an arms race between a bunch of different factions.
See it should last me a while for content.
No.2132
>>2128If I do a modern one I'll do BRICS.
No.2135
>>2133Oh well hell, it looks like the Sino-Soviet split started in the 1960s, how about this: Soviets and the PLA work together after both sides discover a portal in the same area and they jointly invade.
Or I could just push it back to the 1959.
Neither here nor there, just musing
No.2166
>>2165Are you writing anything yet or just planning still?
No.2167
>>2166It's only been one days I haven't started writing the story proper yet.
It'll probably be a little bit until I get some prose written down.
No.2200
>>2197>diversity shit. Have a bunch of different traits and emotions and shit.Do authors still use those random generators that were all the rage back in the early 2010s
No.2202
>>2200You know, I sometimes do that when I just want to hash out a quick character, then go into the what they look like.
Like right now I'm thinking about the three lead characters for the Soviets and PLA.
For the Soviets was planning on doing it by hair color at first to distinguish whose who.
For the PLA/China was going to do it based on bust size.
Barely any of this is set in stone.
Also I use:
https://www.seventhsanctum.com/ No.2203
>>2202I also like using
¥ http://www.chaoticshiny.com/and
¥ https://www.fantasynamegenerators.com/is probably my second most used thing, because I cannot be asked to come up with names on the spot.
No.2204
>>2202>For the PLA/China was going to do it based on bust size.What? From A to BB? hehe
No.2205
>>2204In my head, thinking like having the Chinese commanders end up with like, one has a nice bust (maybe C cup?), one has a nice ass and small bust, and one that is more ditzy and has big tits.
But again I'm coming up with this on the spot.
No.2208
>>2137Random proposal: you have a bunch of races that are single-sex, and the result of their offspring is determined by who was the dominant one during seggs. Battle of the pheromones.
>>2197>Have a bunch of different traits and emotions and shit.To me the main question is always "for what purpose." Say, if someone's hot-headed, what consequences will that have? And then, what traits can you give to someone else so the two clash or get along or both, that sorta thing. What does it set up?
No.2212
>>2208¥ Random proposal: you have a bunch of races that are single-sex, and the result of their offspring is determined by who was the dominant one during seggs. Battle of the pheromones.Noted. Sounds like a great idea.
Also I think what you said is probably better then the way I do it, because right now it feels like I'm working outside in, instead of thinking of the plot first.
No.2213
>>2212It doesn't have to be the plot per se, if you just want to have a bunch of people fucking around then question would be more what kind of moments does it set up, doesn't need to be a macro thing.
For example, the battle of the pheromones thing would mean that these monsters could be beating the crap out of each other while copulating, having a tossup, a fight. It's a realistic consequence of the rule given the creatures we're dealing with, and you can use that to justify some rather interesting moments.
Also, green is the one you use for literal textual quotes, yen for everything else.
No.2214
Oh, and these sexy fights would actually be kinda irrelevant to the plot, that's my point.
No.2215
>>2213>>2214>be kinda irrelevant to the plotEh whatever, could just have it be a side-thing. Like a short sidechapter thing. Not filler, oh god no, don't want that, but a good side story thing.
Neither here nor there, I think it's a good idea though and I'll see what I can do to incorporate it into the story.
No.2224
>>2220Part 2:
I managed to find the issue for Pyramid, it was Issue 44.
It's really nice having all the GURPS books on hand. People don't like GURPS apparently, say its too obtuse, but what's so obtuse about rolling 3d6?
No.2255
Actually yeah I got like a spitball question.
Big fan of the rule of three for at least the starting kind of story, thinking about having like, 3 commanders, have them be of different styles and rank.
I already got like the "blonde that's pretty ditzy." as a character.
No.2295
>>2294I think I said that wrong.
It's a cute blonde Chinese woman who is a PLA officer.
Don't mind me I am dumb as shit and I am thankful for technology to help me express myself better.
No.2304
>>2303I forgot to spoil the image.
It wasn't this image though.
No.2315
Okay so in today's calamity of thinking:
Deciding if I should go for one of four
¥ Futanari/women orcs that look similar (think like that one Chinese (I think?) [https://exhentai.org/g/1592759/b4a8c889b0/] artist cg series) ¥ Male orcs and petite orc women (think that one kawaisaw doujin)¥ Male orcs and female orcs are just ugly¥ generic hentai orcs It matters to me dammit.
No.2319
>>2315are you gonna have orc rapers
I mean like
>>>/ec/13354 >>>/ec/13386 No.2321
>>2319You know what; Yes I am.
I have a I don't know, a thing for wanting to be a tribal strongman. Glad I can just write it out.
I'm glad people are actually reading my thread or at least going "Oh jesus what's this retard saying now."
No.2341
So like, this is the outline I got so far, but retold to /aut/
Starts with the MC getting kicked out of village for fucking a tanned warrior chick whose like the the village chieftain (maybe futa?) main bitch; so he goes out with his small gang, fights and kills some rival gang and ends up with a petite oni looking orc woman princess, little bit of curve don't get me wrong.
His group discovers a supply depot. Here's where we learn that a joint invasion of via not!Stargate by the Soviets and the PLA via a alt-1980s world. And the officers are now women. Because fuck you.
MC finds said supply depot in the orc tribal territory, he sends his b-team in and they get slaughtered. Thus learning it is well-defended. But after waiting a couple of days, he decides to start a wild fire in the hills and cause them to investigate. It works, they investigate and the MC and his A-team squad end up acquiring firearms. And because they are aware of gunpowder weapons, they know how to shoot and they fit in their hands. They loot the supply depot, take a Tank Destroyer [PTZ-89] and using machine guns they kill a the PLA squads. MC discovers where the PLA officer is at, fucks her, takes her part of his small little traveling harem. [You know I should just like, leave them in different locations, or I don't know.]
Oh so at that supply depot there happens to be a dirty-bomb/little Nuke with the looted weapons. Why? Ancient orc temple needs to be destroyed according to the PLA, by the most violent means, thank you Mao
So the PLA are tracking it, and the main arc's enemy is this ditzy blonde, maybe slightly gyaruish, splitting hairs here PLA major, nice tits. She learns of the attack, sends a commando squad to retake the nuke.
So MC arrives as luck would have it at the rival village of the MC. Where the rival guy from earlier was from. MC wants to recruit from them. Village leader, big orc dude, goes "hah fuck off loser." MC and village leader have an alleged fight to the death, with the MC almost about to lose when the PLA commando show up. MC, heavily wounded, kills the PLA commandos with his squad. Most of his squad, his friends, are dead. The village elder allows him to recruit from the village, and now he got like an entire platoon (4 squads) worth of soldiers. The PLA commando woman leader person yeah, slim, cute, tells the MC about the nuke. He doesn't really know or care. He also fucks her.
Now there ends up being a short montage here, going through and recruiting from the different variant of orcs (mostly fat orcs though). Now he has at least ten squads, which is like two platoons? Which is like the bare minimum for it to be a company.
During this time he's been training these orcs and looting supply depots for more supplies. He has now gained a lot of ammo and firearms and he learns that the PLA is about to invade.
So now I have to start war-gaming and hopefully the orcs will win and defeat the communists with their own weapons.
No.2342
>>2341Ohhhh, the MC is an orc? I thought it'd be the other way around since GATE was the inspiration. Interesting.
No.2346
>>2342See I fucking love the concept of like some really kuso mob race getting advanced weapons dropped on them.
Plus I think orcs are really neat. Like them because I like being able to self-insert as a tribal barbarians like the people who lived in Northern Europe. That's really faggy of me to say that but it's true.
Like I think the concept spurred from North Korea invades fantasy Earth, and the fallout that causes because lol North Korea.
And then it turned into "Why not just have the Chinese and Russia do it."
And then I was like, wow, I want to make this porn too.
You know another idea I have is the Qarmatians getting AK-47s and establishing their weird Islamic sect thing harder. Sacking Mecca and all that.
No.2347
>>2346>Plus I think orcs are really neat. Like them because I like being able to self-insert as a tribal barbarians like the people who lived in Northern Europe.I honestly think that if you made this comparison in the text, it'd be absolutely hilarious. Could either be the narration saying it or a human complaining about the orcs' resemblance to those "ruinous Germans" or what have you. Maybe mention the Japs too.
No.2348
>>2347I will put that in the outline somewhere that like a People Liberation Army officer, probably the main arc villain compare them to Tibetans or... Yeah the Japanese barbarians or something. Or Mongolians. The Chinese will always be angry at the Mongolians no joke.
Okay so the Chinese and the Soviets (Russians) are trying to reconquer all their home territory and trying to force communism on these "fantasy" races.
Honestly I thought GATE was a really funny concept, like I know the guy wrote it seriously and he's a nationalist or some shit (that's what the last conversation I had about GATE was bitched at me said) and I was like, you know, why not be like Kafka or Camus and go "Hey you know what, it's absurd, in the reader head, this is a wank fest but damn it's funny to read. Why get mad."
No.2367
Okay so I got the first-act outlined!
This is the first draft version, hasn't been edited yet.
Chapter 1: It begins with the MC (an orc) fucking a tanned human girl/chieftain's main bitch. He gets banished along with his small group of twenty men. After he gets kicked out, a rival orc from a different village shows up while they are wandering in the first couple of hours. MC fights the other orc, and takes the orc's concubine, a virgin orc princess with little horns, petite, nice curves. MC is wounded in the fight.
Chapter 2: Him and his small gang find the supply-depot outpost inside the territory. He sends his B-team in and they get massacred by the heavy machine guns. Here we learn that the Chinese and Russians from a different dimension have invaded here and are trying to spread communism (of a different blend depending on the area.). MC learns that the place is heavily defended and by the end of the chapter he goes "I got an idea."
Chapter 3: He sets aflame the hills and nearby forest, and while the PLA squads go out and investigate, his group sneaks in and they wipe out the PLA squads when they return. PLA officer of said squad is discovered. MC fucks her. MC takes enough firearms to arm a bunch of men and a tank destroyer, and heads out. Also finds a WMD but he is unaware of what it does.
Chapter 4: [1 Scene] Introduce the PLA ditzy blonde bimbo main villainess. She learns about the attack and sends a commando squad after the MC.[/1 Scene] [1 Scene] The PLA officer tries to tell the MC about the nuke, he doesn't care. She's going "You should really return it." The warband set off to a nearby village, the village the happens to be the rival's village. This village has fat but strong orcs. MC goes "I want to recruit from here." Chieftain laughs, challenges the MC to a duel to the death after he insults him, and they fight. But the MC is about to be defeated when the PLA commandos arrive. [/1 Scene]
Chapter 5: Heavily wounded from the fight with the chieftain, he fights the PLA commandos with the ZT whatever designation. Kills the commandos no problem. He's a natural at shooting. Still heavily wounded, he then turns to the orc chieftain and the chieftain allows him to recruit. MC gang is dead, but he recruits fresh soldiers. He also rapes/fucks the PLA commando woman, who tells him about the WMD.
Chapter 6: Now with about 5 squads of Orc Infantry and the one tank destroyer, it becomes a sort of montage where in each paragrapth it describes the raids on the supply depots and the recruitment of different orc tribes and their varities. By the end they end up with enough arms to have 20 elements/squads of infantry, but no vehicles sans the Tank Destroyer. Chapter ends when they end up seeing the massive mechanized infantry squads and tanks.
Chapter 7: MC makes a tactical desision and decides to retreat into the grasslands/hill area and recruit more soldiers. While that is going on, the PLA commanding officer of the detachment company ends up building a small fortress/fortification and has her platoons spread out. MC recruits more soldiers. He learns from the PLA commando that there's probably going to be the main fleet of vehicles at the fortress.
Chatper 8: There's a massive cut, and it starts off with the MC going "We managed to acquire some of their mechanized vehicles." Then we go back to explain what happens. MC learned, via the PLA commando, who has these devices, a Fulton device, that takes it to his moving warcamp. It goes into detail as it goes on record, and basically just tell the reader "Yeah he stole about 25 PLA Armored Personal Carriers." and now the people are armored and they have RPGs as well.
Chapter 9: MC decides they need to start setting soldiers up in the area and try to force encounters with the PLA. They are heavily outgunned, but they are planning on doing guerrilla style hit and run attacks. Now that they are mechnaized, they can move around faster. Might be a "MC explains his plan situation."
End of the first act.
So I've been somewhat productive. Going to probably have these chapters be short. Like 1,000 words (that's like a page and a half(?)).
No.2373
>>2367Wow, I had the impression the Chinese were the protagonists
No.2374
>>2373Nah fuck that, as I said earlier they're akin to like the Demon Lord/otherworld invaders that heroes need to defeat and drive back.
No.2375
>>2374The Chinese and the Soviets I mean
I mean it's more like a grey-on-black fight if you wanna talk about morality.
No.2391
I am going to war game but right now I'm exploring the idea if the MC loses the battle.
No.2415
>>2412I dont know if you're going for general isekai fiction or war fantasy hentai ala taimaninin
No.2416
>>2415War Fantasy Hentai like Kuroinu-like elements with isekai elements (but it isn't the main point).
Think like, native guy responding to "Demons" invading his homeland at first and his boner for revenge.
Like think if it was GATE told from the fantasy native perspective, and instead of Japan, it's the Soviets and the Chinese.
It's a working title we don't gotta worry about it.
Sorry I'm writing a confusing mess.
No.2432
I'm probably going to have to rework the outline, merge chapters together so it's more workable.
I'm on act 4 of 5, but I'll rework it and then start writing.
No.2435
>>2434Yeah it's a gross name but the art looks nice.
Love tailpussy stuff, very eroi.
No.2436
>>2435that nero needs more muscle
No.2437
>>2434That's Mordred though, but yeah she should have little bit more muscles.
No.2438
flippin saberface
No.2444
>>2439Get the illya bad end and leave it at that
No.2445
>>2443Happy you're making progress
No.2462
Oh and today, I'm having a burger on the grill with mozzarella cheese.
>>2461>time every day to write something (can be anything). I usually do it at 10PM to 2AM.
No.2470
Just dont overly force yourself during the scheduled windows, good way to burn yourself out
No.2471
>>2470That's very true. The last thing I was writing, I was at 6 chapters totally completed, and then I got burned out by the seventh chapter.
No.2483
Breaks are important
No.2484
please bump responsibly
No.2486
>>2484i don't know the bump rules or etiquette please tell me them so i do not make a fool of myself here any longer
No.2491
>>2486The only truly rude thing is on-topic saging. If you refrain from that, you're better than 90% of kissu.
No.2492
>>2491On-topic saging usually means the topic isn't directly related to the OP conversation.
Anyways so I have to war game something out, a big ass battle in like China about to happen, MC leading his massive ass army that he acquired throughout the story, vs some general
No.2493
>>2492>On-topic saging usually means the topic isn't directly related to the OP conversation.That's just ordinary saging and that's okay.
>Anyways so I have to war game something out, a big ass battle in like China about to happen, MC leading his massive ass army that he acquired throughout the story, vs some generalWhat if they had to fight Nekone's ass
No.2494
>>2491what about off topic bumping
No.2495
>>2493That's a big ass.
>>2494That's just rude.
No.2496
>>2493>What if they had to fight Nekone's assNekone's fat butt could be the battlefield.
No.2498
>>2496I mean I could import the image into maptool and use that as the battlefield, I don't know how I'll make it work for the story though.
No.2499
>>2498the battle for hometown
No.2552
>>2551>Head's been hurting real bad That just means you're making progress
No.2554
>>2553Important update
Took some Aspirin.
Re-learned that alt key on firefox opens the menu bar thing (which is neat).
No.2561
>>2559Warmongering is the worst way to win at Civ V. science is mad OP
No.2562
>>2561Why is that, for both things.
I like doing war gaming and conquering lands. Ended up getting very wealthy and went communist so I could buy stuff.
Plus it took me 9 hours and it was the quickest way for me to beat the game.
No.2564
Civ V is just eh for wargaming because that's not its main focus and the AI is bad at compared to IV. Which is also not great because of the unlimited unit stacks. What you're looking for is WH40K Gladius, Warlock, Age of Wonders III. Everyone raves about sins of a solar empire but thats 4x mixed with RTS.
Civ's a fun relax and zone out game but for wargaming it's ridiculous that a small tall civ like ethiopia can shit out a fighting force that can rival a massive wide one like China or the US
No.2565
Ideology also doesnt get enough use. Order civs should not have to use gold on tile improvements, but maybe nerf trade routes
No.2566
>>2564Age of Wonders III is not very good, IV is much better.
Though as somebody that grew up with AOW 1 I am still disappointed with how the franchise went. But I think if IV was a new franchise it would be okay whereas III is just bad.
No.2568
>>2567Ahh, that makes sense.
No.2570
>>2564Okay, I spent 9 hours from ancient to the end game (modern era), the game was threatening me and telling me "lol Brazil is going to bitch slap you with a cultural victory if you don't attack."
So I had to attack, as Belka, from Ace Combat, didn't even get to use a lot of planes ironically enough.
But yeah it was a 9 hour game and I didn't feel like dragging it out even longer.
I also managed to booty blast most of the congress situation because I was so rich I ended up buying alliances with city-states so I can pass my legislation.
No.2572
you're making no progress because you're playing video games when it gets hard. Also stop blogging.
No.2573
Blogging is good, but after a bloody war it was confined to the blog thread
>>1904Well I mean, blogging responsibly is good. If you want to focus on writing then blogging may not be good.
No.2575
>>2572Well no, I just don't want to write at the moment.
Like the Civ V game two days ago fucked my sleep up yesterday so now that its today I will probably not write but maybe write I don't know, I got everything set up to start.
No.2576
You're civving too hard
No.2577
>>2574crying that miura will never get to experience U149
No.2578
>>2574Alternate dimension Andy sounds like an asshole, I don't like that guy, thinks he's hot shit when he isn't. Probably doesn't even what a 4chan is.
In other, other news, I still have a sinus headache or some shit, it's not a sinus infection yet, God bless, but it's really fucking with me and the lights are so bright oy gevalt.
Anyways, there's going to be something written soon(TM). Just have to 1) be in the right mood to write smut, and 2)get over this nasty shit.
No.2579
>>2578Addendum: when I said nasty shit I mean the sinus stuff.
Thank you all for reading my blog!
No.2582
>>2580Ah but don't you see, all of these things are related to my writing though.
Just take it easy.
No.2599
Okay so I got inspired by recent events and started working on the story. Only a little bit of words have been written but any progress is good progress. It’s hard to write smut sometimes, I have to get into the right mindset and mood for it. Which sucks but whatever.
Got another story idea, it’s basically about a group of three civilizations that are allied with each other, so it’s like 9 civilizations on three different teams wanting to vie for the world.
No.2694
>>2599Just have a document for your other ideas and write them there. Dont get distracted by it!
No.2698
missing 4/qa/ and going down memory lane
No.2703
the missers
No.2704
Okay so the gameplan for today:
¥ write
That is all.
No.2705
write the official vern x berz slashfic
No.2706
poor berz, always getting mixed up with the bern
No.2776
Okay so state of affairs time:
I have not written in a while.
Gomen.
No.2784
Workshopping another idea, basically the gist is that MC-kun wants to be the emperor of the sub-continent and he has to fight six radically different nations.
Yeah I know it has the "stink" of Mount and Blade Warband but it's a good concept.
No.2785
Actually I got a question, does anyone actually care that things end up being derivative?
No.2804
>>2785If its derivative ENOUGH
No.2806
>>2804Don't do a heuristic on me, I'm not good with those.